Prologue: Restitutor Orbis II
The Western Roman Empire in 457 was in dire straits. Germanic tribes ran rampant all over the empire, carving out their own de facto independent kingdoms from Western Roman territory, reducing the available manpower and tax revenue for the empire. North Africa had been conquered by the Vandals, which essentially ruined the Western Roman economy. Constant civil wars, usurpations, rebellions, and wars with the barbarians had weakened Rome. Not since the dark days of the mid third century had things been this bad. A series of ineffective leaders had not helped, and the Roman people themselves were demoralized. People were not as motivated to join the army anymore, leading to the Romans relying on Germanic peoples. Contrary to popular belief, these troops were not actually ineffective or disloyal per se. In fact, some of the greatest Western Roman victories would be won with these foederati, as we will soon see. The Western Roman army could still kick some serious ass. However, the lack of native Romans in the army was a serious problem. All in all, it didn’t look like the Western Roman Empire as a political entity would survive much longer. All of that changed in 457.
Okay, not all of it changed. In fact the only thing that really did change was the ineffective leadership. In 457, after a series of military successes, the general Majorian was proclaimed emperor by his troops after Valentinian III died. The barbarian Magister Militum Ricimer supported this; Ricimer thought that Majorian could be made a puppet emperor, which many emperors at this time had been.
Upon taking charge, Majorian set about getting things together. He launched a series of spectacular military campaigns to reconquer lost territory from the Germanic tribes. He defeated a Vandal attack on Italy in 457, and then defeated the Visigoths at the Battle of Arelate, and then secured Septimania and reduced the goths to foederati status once more, bringing Hispania back into the empire. He then attacked the Burgundians, moving his army across the Alps. He expelled them from the Rhone valley and reintegrated Gaul into the empire as well. At the same time, Nepotianus attacked the Suebi, reducing them as well.
These reconquests were spectacular, but the real prize lay ahead: Africa. In the third century, North Africa underwent a massive economic expansion, which only continued during the late antique period. Securing it would be vital, as it provided the city of Rome with grain imports, provided tax revenue, was a key trade hub in the Mediterranean, and was the largest producer of pottery in the Western Empire at the time. Securing it would be vital for the economy and survival of the state. Accordingly, Majorian prepared a fleet of 300 ships, docked on the Spanish coast.
The exact details of that night in 461 AD are a mystery. We do not know exactly what happened. Historians are only able to reliably put together a general picture of the events surrounding Majorian’s fleet. This may surprise modern readers, given the abundance of accounts in the past, but recent scholarship has revealed that these are mostly embellishments not based on any hard evidence. What scholars do generally agree on is that in 460 or 461, the Vandal king Geiseric attempted to sneak-attack Majorian’s fleet on the Spanish coast before Majorian became unbeatable. To this end, he attempted to bribe several of Majorian’s captains to switch sides. This attempt failed; Historians agree that Majorian’s soldiers must’ve caught Geiseric’s agents in the act. The corrupt captains and Vandal agents were arrested and executed for treason. Majorian’s fleet defeated Geiseric’s, and the invasion proceeded.
In late September 461, Majorian launched his attack on the Vandal kingdom. His fleet did battle with a Vandal armada at Cape Bon, where the Vandals were decisively crushed. His troops landed and he marched on Carthage. Meanwhile, Marcellinus, a Roman general who ruled in Illyricum, sailed and attacked Sardinia, conquering it from the Vandals by October 461.
Geiseric knew Majorian’s forces were stronger than his own, and further knew that the general population would support Majorian over him. Therefore, he elected to avoid directly engaging with Majorian. However, his situation was dire. If he stayed in Carthage, Majorian would siege him, and it was likely that the populace of the city would turn on him. However, he didn’t really have anywhere else to go, and so reluctantly elected to remain in Carthage, hoping to wear Majorian down.
Sure enough, in late October 461 Majorian’s force arrived outside of Carthage and began preparations for a siege. Majorian had taken great care to treat the Roman populace well, seeming like a liberator rather than a conqueror. He was cheered as a hero as he walked through recently liberated towns, most of which gave up without a fight. His forces fought a few skirmishes with the Vandals, which the Romans won.
As Majorian began to siege down Carthage, he was extra on-guard for potential subterfuge from Geiseric. Sure enough, he attempted to bribe several of Majorian’s foederati to desert him, but seeing what had happened to those who took bribes and not wanting to risk their pay and potential loot, they instead reported this to Majorian, who rewarded their loyalty. After two weeks of siege, the Romans in Carthage tried to open the gates to Majorian, but Geiseric’s guards stopped them. Majorian then sent spies to spread discontent among the populace of the city, and Geiseric was forced to spread his troops thinner and thinner to restore order. Finally, after another week of siege, the Romans rose up at night to open the gates. This time, they overwhelmed the guards, who were stretched too thinly.
Majorian’s spies had alerted him to this plan, and his troops were ready. They stormed the city, killing and capturing the Vandal garrison. Geiseric managed to flee, along with many other Vandal leaders, but on November 21st, 461, Carthage was liberated. The next day Majorian paraded his troops down the streets of the city, surrounded by throngs of cheering people. The Vandal leaders who were captured were executed. Majorian took a few weeks to consolidate his position and reintegrate Africa into the empire. Grain shipments to Rome resumed, as did tax payments, although missed taxes from the time under Vandal rule would not have to be made up. New Roman administrators were brought in or promoted, and new garrisons installed.
However, Geiseric was still out there with a force of Vandals a few thousand strong. Majorian gathered his troops to confront Geiseric, who saw the writing on the wall and surrendered. Majorian sentenced him to house arrest in an estate.
Majorian had just won a major victory, and the future of the Western Roman Empire looked bright for the first time in decades. However, they were not out of the woods yet; The survival of the empire would be a hard fought battle. The persistence of the Roman state was never guaranteed. They had to work for it, fight for it, and die for it. It was hard earned. However, Majorian’s victory reinvigorated the Roman state, and without him, it’s likely the western half of the empire would have fallen in the fifth century, leaving the fate of the east unknown.

NOTE: Anything here is subject to future retcons pending viewer comments and corrections, as well as any of my own thoughts. Also, this is my first ever timeline entry. Any constructive criticism is welcome. It will be a while before I hit my stride. I hope to go much more into depth in the future and flesh out the scenario and the world I plan to build. Any comments on formatting and style would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.



so as a start it's not bad at all, very smooth I'd say, the only flaw so to speak is that the reading is a bit dry ( in the sense that it seems more like a prologue / summary ) than a real effective start of the plot, especially if we consider that at least 4 years of history have already passed, perhaps there should have been a little more context before jumping straight into the action, but that's not a flaw, for the rest it is as previously said very promising, continue like this, I really like the countryside in Africa and especially in Sardinia ( the latter for obvious reasons 😉 ) and with this the sack of Rome was avenged 🎉
 
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so as a start it's not bad at all, very smooth I'd say, the only flaw so to speak is that the reading is a bit dry ( in the sense that it seems more like a prologue / summary ) than a real effective start of the plot, especially if we consider that at least 4 years of history have already passed, perhaps there should have been a little more context before jumping straight into the action, but that's not a flaw, for the rest it is as previously said very promising, continue like this, I really like the countryside in Africa and especially in Sardinia ( the latter for obvious reasons 😉 ) and with this the sack of Rome was avenged 🎉
Don't worry, I plan to flesh everything out much more. I intended this to be a bit of a pilot episode if you will; Trying to see how it's recieved and what works and what doesn't. Thank you so much for your support, and please continue to critique. I want to go into much more depth once everything actually gets rolling, starting with how Majorian deals with Ricimer.
 
Good stuff so far! Could be more fleshed out but you already said that I know.

Also I know the video you were inspired by and I hope you don’t do what that guy did in regards to who Majorian married. One of Valentinian’s daughters makes the most sense as it legitimizes his rule further and ties him to the theodosian and Valentinian dynasties.
 
Excellent start, and Majorian already has a lot of feathers in his cap. However the Franks remain, as do the Visigoths... When Ricimir rebels I think it'll become more than obvious that Majorian will have to do what Leo and Zeno did in OTL to reduce the barbarian influence in the empire (not them per se but eliminate the use of tribal leaders with power bases in opposition to the Empire itself)

What I'd like to see is how Majorian and Leo coordinate together, and how they secure a proper dynastic connection to rule the empire together without civil war breaking out.
 
Chapter I
Chapter I: Winning is Easy, Governing is Harder
It’s hard to overstate just how remarkable Majorian’s reconquests were, even without considering the North African campaign, which many consider to be his magnum opus. In less than five years, he had doubled the size of the Western Roman Empire with his reconquests, moving with incredible speed and force. Such a feat was matched in Roman history only by Aurelian, who had found the empire in a similar crisis and restored it in a similar fashion.
Now that Majorian had installed loyal Roman administrators in North Africa and sent the grain fleets to Rome once more, he planned to sail back to Italy in spring 462. His army had settled into winter quarters, and he didn’t want to move without them. Politics in Rome were as volatile as ever, and every Emperor’s position was fragile at best. In order to ensure he would survive and be able to enforce his reforms, Majorian refused to go without his army. As fate would have it, his caution would be rewarded.
In late March 462, Majorian and his army sailed for Italy. While he had been out kicking ass and rescuing the empire from the brink of collapse, Ricimer had been in Ravenna, scheming. He had initially supported Majorian’s emperorship; They were friends, and Ricimer figured that he could easily manipulate Majorian. Instead Majorian raged against the dying light, and did so with remarkable effectiveness. Ricimer felt his power slipping away, and figured that Majorian would reduce the power of his officials and generals, bringing them back under state control. Indeed, he had already implemented anti-corruption measures. Seeing that Majorian had no intention of being a mere puppet of a Germanic general, Ricimer began plotting to depose him and replace him with a true puppet. Accordingly, he began to gather his supporters and forces in Ravenna, and sent out a call for more troops from his supporters in the provinces.
When Majorian landed in Italy, he sent a letter to Ricimer ordering him to disperse his troops. Ricimer refused, and assembled his army for battle. Majorian was saddened by his friend’s betrayal, but he was undeterred; His duty was to the empire, not to any one man. That was where he and almost every recent power-holder in the empire differed. Majorian marched half of his army from Ostia in May 462, sailing the other half to Ravenna directly under Marcellinus. Ricimer officially raised Libius Severus as emperor. Battle was joined outside Ravenna in early June 462.
Majorian assembled his infantry at the top of a hill, which they began to fortify. Ricimer knew time was against him; Unless he won this battle soon, his supporters would abandon him, as most of them knew full well that Majorian was the rightful emperor, and he was very popular with the people after his victories. Majorian’s fleet had blockaded Ravenna, so Ricimer couldn’t escape. He had to attack Majorian’s position. Accordingly, he ordered his troops up the hill. Majorian’s forces had already dug trenches, breaking up the charge. Both sides’ skirmishers traded fire. Arrows were shot, slingstones launched, javelins cast. The battle for the fate of the entire western world had begun. Once Ricimer’s troops hit the trenches, Majorian’s archers fired a volley. Men screamed as they fell, dead or wounded. Ricimer’s troops were forced to form a shield wall, slowing them down.
Meanwhile, Majorian had ordered the other half of his army to secretly land a few hours’ march down the coast and march up. Once Ricimer’s forces were engaged, the other army would pin them, and Majorian’s cavalry would smash the opposing force to pieces. If the plan worked it would go down in history as a brilliant military maneuver. If it failed it would be remembered forever as a great folly. And indeed, it was risky. Because his army was split, Majorian had few reserves, while Ricimer would have a proper reserve to throw into the battle when the time was right. If Ricimer could use his reserves effectively, he could break Majorian’s line before the other half of his army arrived.
Ricimer’s forces engaged Majorian’s troops at the top of the hill. Majorian’s dug-in veterans withstood Ricimer’s charge, and inflicted more casualties than they took. Still, Ricimer’s troops were motivated by desperation; If the rebellion failed, they would be rounded up and imprisoned or executed. And so they fought hard, and Majorian’s line was slowly pushed back. Ricimer knew this was the moment, and threw in his reserves. Spears clashed against shields, searching for an opening. Men pushed against one another. Archers fired volleys point blank. Men screamed and fell, their comrade’s boots crunching over their dead or dying bodies as they marched ever forwards.
Majorian looked on with great worry. If his line broke, any chance of restoring the empire would be gone. He threw in what few reserves he had, but his troops could only hold for so long. They had been fighting for a few hours at this point, and they were exhausted. In ancient warfare the goal was not so much to kill the enemy in direct conflict, though that certainly helped. The goal was to break them. Once their formation was broken, the victorious force would inflict great slaughter upon their defeated foes. Whichever side could hold on longer would win. Ricimer’s forces fought with the desperation of a cornered animal, and the force and ferocity of their assault was battering down Majorian’s line.
Around 3:00 in the afternoon, Majorian received a message: The other half of his army was near, and he needed to hold out. Knowing victory was near if he could just hold on, he rallied his men. Grabbing a spear himself, he lept into the fray, fighting on the line with his men. This was incredibly risky, but they needed a morale boost.
A few minutes later, a horn sounded; Marcellinus had arrived. His troops marched towards Ricimer’s forces. Recognizing the trap, Ricimer tried to withdraw his forces, but it was too late. His army was caught between the two forces. Seeing their reinforcements, Majorian’s troops were reinvigorated. They pushed forward. Ricimer’s forces panicked and broke. Majorian unleashed his cavalry. It was a rout.
Seeing his forces in shambles, Ricimer tried to flee, but Majorian’s cavalry rode him down and captured him. He was brought before the emperor, who had him executed publicly. Marcellinus was promoted to Magister Militum of the west in his place, a reward for his loyalty.
Majorian removed Ricimer’s hardline loyalists and had them imprisoned. Everyone else kept their position after swearing loyalty to the new emperor. After installing loyalists into the upper offices, Majorian set about getting the empire in shape. For while he had largely restored its territorial integrity, with the Germanic tribes once again reduced to foederati status, the empire was still badly in need of domestic reform. Accordingly, Majorian sets out enforcing his earlier reforms and implementing new ones. With his victories and reconquests, his position was as secure as it could get, and his prestige and popularity were quite high. And with North Africa reincorporated into the empire, the economy was improving, even if slowly. The people of Rome were receiving their grain doles again, and so were content.
Majorian sought to make tax collection more efficient, and to eliminate corruption and embezzlement. He had canceled past debts and owed taxes, knowing that nobody could effectively pay the accumulated debt. He also made it so that public administrators could no longer collect taxes, which they had been mostly keeping for themselves and refusing to pay. Rather, only the governors could collect taxes now. He reigned in the abuses of the senators. All of these measures increased the revenue flowing into the coffers without actually raising taxes, and also increased the people’s trust in the administration.
Majorian reestablished the office of defensor civitatis, a public official responsible for defending the people in public trials against the administration. He also forgave the previous abuses of the decurions, and forbade them from abandoning their status.
Majorian also forbade women from taking vows of chastity until they were forty years old. This was to increase birth rates and reduce illicit affairs. Many women were being forced to take religious vows in order to keep wealth in the family. This new law also gave women who had been forced to take vows the same rights to inheritance as everyone else in the family. He also prohibited young widows under the influence of the clergy from taking religious vows.
Majorian involved the senatorial aristocracy of Italy in his administration. However, his deposed predecessor Avitus had made the mistake of only trusting the senators from his native Gaul. Majorian used senators from both Italy and Gaul in his administration. He also promised the senators that he would not use the accusations of informers against them, which was a fear of many.
Majorian also passed laws to protect the old buildings of the empire. Judges who had let the monuments be taken apart for building material were fined, and their subordinates were whipped or their hands amputated. The senate had the power to decide whether buildings could be taken apart, and Majorian still reserved the right to override this.
Overall, Majorian’s reign was wildly successful. One peasant wrote, “I cannot recall an emperor in memory more just and skilled.” A 6th century historian, Procopius, wrote that he “Surpassed in virtue all who have ever been emperors of the Romans.” Sidonius Apollinaris, a contemporary of Majorian, stated, “That he was gentle to his subjects; That he was terrible to his enemies; and that he excelled in every virtue, all his predecessors who had reigned over the Romans.” Such high praise is indeed justified. The empire was not out of the woods by any means, and there would be plenty of trials and tribulations, both in the near and distant future, but for the first time in a long time, there was hope. The western flame was once again flaring up.

There's the first real chapter. Comments and questions are more than welcome. Merry late Christmas! Please give constructive criticism. I'm probably going to start adding in scenes and narrative parts after this, and I want to know what you guys think. Happy holidays!
 
Chapter I: Winning is Easy, Governing is Harder
It’s hard to overstate just how remarkable Majorian’s reconquests were, even without considering the North African campaign, which many consider to be his magnum opus. In less than five years, he had doubled the size of the Western Roman Empire with his reconquests, moving with incredible speed and force. Such a feat was matched in Roman history only by Aurelian, who had found the empire in a similar crisis and restored it in a similar fashion.
Now that Majorian had installed loyal Roman administrators in North Africa and sent the grain fleets to Rome once more, he planned to sail back to Italy in spring 462. His army had settled into winter quarters, and he didn’t want to move without them. Politics in Rome were as volatile as ever, and every Emperor’s position was fragile at best. In order to ensure he would survive and be able to enforce his reforms, Majorian refused to go without his army. As fate would have it, his caution would be rewarded.
In late March 462, Majorian and his army sailed for Italy. While he had been out kicking ass and rescuing the empire from the brink of collapse, Ricimer had been in Ravenna, scheming. He had initially supported Majorian’s emperorship; They were friends, and Ricimer figured that he could easily manipulate Majorian. Instead Majorian raged against the dying light, and did so with remarkable effectiveness. Ricimer felt his power slipping away, and figured that Majorian would reduce the power of his officials and generals, bringing them back under state control. Indeed, he had already implemented anti-corruption measures. Seeing that Majorian had no intention of being a mere puppet of a Germanic general, Ricimer began plotting to depose him and replace him with a true puppet. Accordingly, he began to gather his supporters and forces in Ravenna, and sent out a call for more troops from his supporters in the provinces.
When Majorian landed in Italy, he sent a letter to Ricimer ordering him to disperse his troops. Ricimer refused, and assembled his army for battle. Majorian was saddened by his friend’s betrayal, but he was undeterred; His duty was to the empire, not to any one man. That was where he and almost every recent power-holder in the empire differed. Majorian marched half of his army from Ostia in May 462, sailing the other half to Ravenna directly under Marcellinus. Ricimer officially raised Libius Severus as emperor. Battle was joined outside Ravenna in early June 462.
Majorian assembled his infantry at the top of a hill, which they began to fortify. Ricimer knew time was against him; Unless he won this battle soon, his supporters would abandon him, as most of them knew full well that Majorian was the rightful emperor, and he was very popular with the people after his victories. Majorian’s fleet had blockaded Ravenna, so Ricimer couldn’t escape. He had to attack Majorian’s position. Accordingly, he ordered his troops up the hill. Majorian’s forces had already dug trenches, breaking up the charge. Both sides’ skirmishers traded fire. Arrows were shot, slingstones launched, javelins cast. The battle for the fate of the entire western world had begun. Once Ricimer’s troops hit the trenches, Majorian’s archers fired a volley. Men screamed as they fell, dead or wounded. Ricimer’s troops were forced to form a shield wall, slowing them down.
Meanwhile, Majorian had ordered the other half of his army to secretly land a few hours’ march down the coast and march up. Once Ricimer’s forces were engaged, the other army would pin them, and Majorian’s cavalry would smash the opposing force to pieces. If the plan worked it would go down in history as a brilliant military maneuver. If it failed it would be remembered forever as a great folly. And indeed, it was risky. Because his army was split, Majorian had few reserves, while Ricimer would have a proper reserve to throw into the battle when the time was right. If Ricimer could use his reserves effectively, he could break Majorian’s line before the other half of his army arrived.
Ricimer’s forces engaged Majorian’s troops at the top of the hill. Majorian’s dug-in veterans withstood Ricimer’s charge, and inflicted more casualties than they took. Still, Ricimer’s troops were motivated by desperation; If the rebellion failed, they would be rounded up and imprisoned or executed. And so they fought hard, and Majorian’s line was slowly pushed back. Ricimer knew this was the moment, and threw in his reserves. Spears clashed against shields, searching for an opening. Men pushed against one another. Archers fired volleys point blank. Men screamed and fell, their comrade’s boots crunching over their dead or dying bodies as they marched ever forwards.
Majorian looked on with great worry. If his line broke, any chance of restoring the empire would be gone. He threw in what few reserves he had, but his troops could only hold for so long. They had been fighting for a few hours at this point, and they were exhausted. In ancient warfare the goal was not so much to kill the enemy in direct conflict, though that certainly helped. The goal was to break them. Once their formation was broken, the victorious force would inflict great slaughter upon their defeated foes. Whichever side could hold on longer would win. Ricimer’s forces fought with the desperation of a cornered animal, and the force and ferocity of their assault was battering down Majorian’s line.
Around 3:00 in the afternoon, Majorian received a message: The other half of his army was near, and he needed to hold out. Knowing victory was near if he could just hold on, he rallied his men. Grabbing a spear himself, he lept into the fray, fighting on the line with his men. This was incredibly risky, but they needed a morale boost.
A few minutes later, a horn sounded; Marcellinus had arrived. His troops marched towards Ricimer’s forces. Recognizing the trap, Ricimer tried to withdraw his forces, but it was too late. His army was caught between the two forces. Seeing their reinforcements, Majorian’s troops were reinvigorated. They pushed forward. Ricimer’s forces panicked and broke. Majorian unleashed his cavalry. It was a rout.
Seeing his forces in shambles, Ricimer tried to flee, but Majorian’s cavalry rode him down and captured him. He was brought before the emperor, who had him executed publicly. Marcellinus was promoted to Magister Militum of the west in his place, a reward for his loyalty.
Majorian removed Ricimer’s hardline loyalists and had them imprisoned. Everyone else kept their position after swearing loyalty to the new emperor. After installing loyalists into the upper offices, Majorian set about getting the empire in shape. For while he had largely restored its territorial integrity, with the Germanic tribes once again reduced to foederati status, the empire was still badly in need of domestic reform. Accordingly, Majorian sets out enforcing his earlier reforms and implementing new ones. With his victories and reconquests, his position was as secure as it could get, and his prestige and popularity were quite high. And with North Africa reincorporated into the empire, the economy was improving, even if slowly. The people of Rome were receiving their grain doles again, and so were content.
Majorian sought to make tax collection more efficient, and to eliminate corruption and embezzlement. He had canceled past debts and owed taxes, knowing that nobody could effectively pay the accumulated debt. He also made it so that public administrators could no longer collect taxes, which they had been mostly keeping for themselves and refusing to pay. Rather, only the governors could collect taxes now. He reigned in the abuses of the senators. All of these measures increased the revenue flowing into the coffers without actually raising taxes, and also increased the people’s trust in the administration.
Majorian reestablished the office of defensor civitatis, a public official responsible for defending the people in public trials against the administration. He also forgave the previous abuses of the decurions, and forbade them from abandoning their status.
Majorian also forbade women from taking vows of chastity until they were forty years old. This was to increase birth rates and reduce illicit affairs. Many women were being forced to take religious vows in order to keep wealth in the family. This new law also gave women who had been forced to take vows the same rights to inheritance as everyone else in the family. He also prohibited young widows under the influence of the clergy from taking religious vows.
Majorian involved the senatorial aristocracy of Italy in his administration. However, his deposed predecessor Avitus had made the mistake of only trusting the senators from his native Gaul. Majorian used senators from both Italy and Gaul in his administration. He also promised the senators that he would not use the accusations of informers against them, which was a fear of many.
Majorian also passed laws to protect the old buildings of the empire. Judges who had let the monuments be taken apart for building material were fined, and their subordinates were whipped or their hands amputated. The senate had the power to decide whether buildings could be taken apart, and Majorian still reserved the right to override this.
Overall, Majorian’s reign was wildly successful. One peasant wrote, “I cannot recall an emperor in memory more just and skilled.” A 6th century historian, Procopius, wrote that he “Surpassed in virtue all who have ever been emperors of the Romans.” Sidonius Apollinaris, a contemporary of Majorian, stated, “That he was gentle to his subjects; That he was terrible to his enemies; and that he excelled in every virtue, all his predecessors who had reigned over the Romans.” Such high praise is indeed justified. The empire was not out of the woods by any means, and there would be plenty of trials and tribulations, both in the near and distant future, but for the first time in a long time, there was hope. The western flame was once again flaring up.

There's the first real chapter. Comments and questions are more than welcome. Merry late Christmas! Please give constructive criticism. I'm probably going to start adding in scenes and narrative parts after this, and I want to know what you guys think. Happy holidays!

truly fantastic chapter, even if I hope that Majoran avoids war campaigns for a while, the small clash against Ricimer may have been too reckless for the very limited resources of the empire ( in the sense of soldiers loyal to the empire and capable in the art of war ) now comes the difficult part, eradicating corruption will be very difficult, but including both the Italian and Gallic senatorial classes is a good start ( it would be appropriate to do the same with the Iberian and African ones ) the reforms that affect the clergy I don't know how much in the long run can be tolerated ( unless our emperor has papal support, otherwise, it must be sought as soon as possible ) to increase the demography in the empire, it would be appropriate to take small Germanic peoples and spread them around the empire ( like the Gepids or Eruli, who Otl were really tiny as a population, it would be enough to divide them into 3/4 parts and dilute them among the population, possibly using only women and children, with the men enlisted in the army )
 
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Ricimer figured that he could easily manipulate Majorian. Instead Majorian raged against the dying light, and did so with remarkable effectiveness. Ricimer felt his power slipping away, and figured that Majorian would reduce the power of his officials and generals, bringing them back under state control. Indeed, he had already implemented anti-corruption measures. Seeing that Majorian had no intention of being a mere puppet of a Germanic general, Ricimer began plotting to depose him and replace him with a true puppet. Accordingly, he began to gather his supporters and forces in Ravenna, and sent out a call for more troops from his supporters in the provinces.
As much as this is a very wel written story and chapter I have some issues with this idea. If this was his goal, why not try to keep majorian irl? Why not wait for a year or two, kill him and be regent over his kid? there wasn't much recovering from the position he was in at that point and many other reasons than just than just that to kill him.

I also feel like his move against majorian at this point feel really dumb of him. Even if his power base is eroding, do you really want to kill the next incarnation of Auralian by fighting him on the battlefield? Why not just wait a year or two for Majorian to piss enough powerfull people off with his reforms and depose him then?
 
truly fantastic chapter, even if I hope that Majoran avoids war campaigns for a while, the small clash against Ricimer may have been too reckless for the very limited resources of the empire ( in the sense of soldiers loyal to the empire and capable in the art of war ) now comes the difficult part, eradicating corruption will be very difficult, but including both the Italian and Gallic senatorial classes is a good start ( it would be appropriate to do the same with the Iberian and African ones ) the reforms that affect the clergy I don't know how much in the long run can be tolerated ( unless our emperor has papal support, otherwise, it must be sought as soon as possible ) to increase the demography in the empire, it would be appropriate to take small Germanic peoples and spread them around the empire ( like the Gepids or Eruli, who Otl were really tiny as a population, it would be enough to divide them into 3/4 parts and dilute them among the population, possibly using only women and children, with the men enlisted in the army )
Thanks! At this point the Pope wasn't the powerhouse that he was in OTL's middle ages. He was still pretty weak and under the emperor. Good idea with the Gepids and such.
As much as this is a very wel written story and chapter I have some issues with this idea. If this was his goal, why not try to keep majorian irl? Why not wait for a year or two, kill him and be regent over his kid? there wasn't much recovering from the position he was in at that point and many other reasons than just than just that to kill him.

I also feel like his move against majorian at this point feel really dumb of him. Even if his power base is eroding, do you really want to kill the next incarnation of Auralian by fighting him on the battlefield? Why not just wait a year or two for Majorian to piss enough powerfull people off with his reforms and depose him then?
I'm not sure. All I could find is that Ricimer captured and killed Majorian after his African campaign in OTL. ITTL he's very worried about Majorian's victories and his crackdowns on corruption. It might have been smarter to bide his time, but humans don't always do the smartest things. There are plenty of instances in Roman history where such events happen.
 
Thanks! At this point the Pope wasn't the powerhouse that he was in OTL's middle ages. He was still pretty weak and under the emperor. Good idea with the Gepids and such.

I'm not sure. All I could find is that Ricimer captured and killed Majorian after his African campaign in OTL. ITTL he's very worried about Majorian's victories and his crackdowns on corruption. It might have been smarter to bide his time, but humans don't always do the smartest things. There are plenty of instances in Roman history where such events happen.

I'm happy to have been useful to you, but be careful to underestimate the papal power, it is certainly not yet the powerhouse that Otl became in the Middle Ages, it is usually pro-imperial when there was a competent power on the throne, but as the only patriarch of the West, bishop of Rome and usually belonging to or having important ties with the upper class rich in the citizens of the City (the senators) is not a figure of little value, after all the Roman people themselves were saved from becoming slaves only thanks to the intervention of the pontiff who personally negotiated with Genseric, without forgetting that no one considers the same presence of the emperor in the city, so a skilled pope is a figure to take into account
 
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I still don’t get ricimer’s motivations and why every Majorian TL has him be evil. He seemed to have been an opportunistic kinda guy who supported Majorian till Majorian became a sinking ship. Unless Majorian directly moved to do something towards ricimer I don’t see why he’d start a civil war over it.

What of the royal family that would’ve been in Carthage when Majorian retook it? Marrying one of the daughters would be the smartest choice.

I wonder what other reforms Majorian will make. Or how he’ll deal with the foederati now that they’re “subjugsted” for the time being.

What will he do with the senate? Adding some Iberian and African and Illyrian members would help keep it from being controlled by just two region’s aristocracy.

I like the idea of settling in small groups of Germans here and there. You boost your demographics, get more troops, they won’t carve kingdoms out of your dying empire as they’re too spread out, and they’re bound to romanize in a generation or two as they are too divided to keep their indentity for long.

Another group to make use of could be the Alans. Iirc they kinda just wondered around Gaul during this time. I believe they were Allied to Soissons and were defeated by ricimer at some point and scattered.
 
I still don’t get ricimer’s motivations and why every Majorian TL has him be evil. He seemed to have been an opportunistic kinda guy who supported Majorian till Majorian became a sinking ship. Unless Majorian directly moved to do something towards ricimer I don’t see why he’d start a civil war over it.

What of the royal family that would’ve been in Carthage when Majorian retook it? Marrying one of the daughters would be the smartest choice.

I wonder what other reforms Majorian will make. Or how he’ll deal with the foederati now that they’re “subjugsted” for the time being.

What will he do with the senate? Adding some Iberian and African and Illyrian members would help keep it from being controlled by just two region’s aristocracy.

I like the idea of settling in small groups of Germans here and there. You boost your demographics, get more troops, they won’t carve kingdoms out of your dying empire as they’re too spread out, and they’re bound to romanize in a generation or two as they are too divided to keep their indentity for long.

Another group to make use of could be the Alans. Iirc they kinda just wondered around Gaul during this time. I believe they were Allied to Soissons and were defeated by ricimer at some point and scattered.
In this timeline at least, Ricimer isn't evil. He was simply worried that Majorian was outgrowing him and would curtail his power.
 
The threat of the Goths and other Foederates are still a danger. Majorian or his successers should do what they can to destroy the former... maybe they could empower the Franks and Alemanni to actually set up settled kingdoms in the lower and upper Rhine respectively with Roman alliance, then play them off each other and against the unconquered tribes to the east.

Britain being reoccupied could also happen, while Emperor Leo could give some forward defense to the danube by trying to reoccupy Dacia.
 
The threat of the Goths and other Foederates are still a danger. Majorian or his successers should do what they can to destroy the former... maybe they could empower the Franks and Alemanni to actually set up settled kingdoms in the lower and upper Rhine respectively with Roman alliance, then play them off each other and against the unconquered tribes to the east.

Britain being reoccupied could also happen, while Emperor Leo could give some forward defense to the danube by trying to reoccupy Dacia.
Indeed. I plan to spend some time dealing with these and how the Romans interact with them moving forwards.
 
The threat of the Goths and other Foederates are still a danger. Majorian or his successers should do what they can to destroy the former... maybe they could empower the Franks and Alemanni to actually set up settled kingdoms in the lower and upper Rhine respectively with Roman alliance, then play them off each other and against the unconquered tribes to the east.

Britain being reoccupied could also happen, while Emperor Leo could give some forward defense to the danube by trying to reoccupy Dacia.



other similar populations which I believe can be easily assimilated by the Romans now that the empire has managed to obtain a small moment of stability, are the Iutungi ( later absorbed by the Alemanni, same fate as the Narists ) but who devastated Rhaetia and were defeated by Aetius between 429 and 431 and then disappeared around the 6th century or the Rugi in Noricum ( they are also very small in terms of the number of components ) instead what happens with the Suebi in Iberia, were they subjugated by Rome ( taking advantage of their fall in the midst of civil war, because they would be on the list too ) or were they incorporated by the Visigoths ?
 
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